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"I wrote this upon anonymous request"

She took the blade and sharpened it twice
And sat it down she did too her dismay
She took the blade once again suddenly
Gazing at its sharp unduly end....

Not again not again she would say
As she took the blade yet again
Her wounds were forgotten and nicely
Mended but too her disdained thinking her
Thoughts were not and she hadn't Succeeded......

To her there was no blade slicing up
Against her skin not at all did it seem to
Hurt or have any mortal pain, she scarcely
Looked at the blade and wanted to cry and go
Out of her own troublesome pain......

She picked up the blade her conscience
Contemplating back and forth, saying yes and
No,do and don't,what would happen she
Did think as she slyly went on and muttered.....

The blade was there and not so very distant,
What would she do, what would she try to do
Next, well that is consequently a very good
Question no less.......
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"I wrote this upon request, if any of you would like me to write a poem, just go ahead and ask....."
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:iconeyesofsnowleopard:
*eyesofsnowleopard Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
beautiful and completey suicidal words, awsome :)
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:iconbewildered-scribbler:
Mood: Neutral *Bewildered-Scribbler Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It is very suicidal but yea thank you^^
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:iconeyesofsnowleopard:
*eyesofsnowleopard Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Your welcome sweetie :tighthug:
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:iconlifes-what-u-make-it:
wow xD Nice work chica :D
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*Bewildered-Scribbler Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks:tighthug:
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:iconlifes-what-u-make-it:
U Know Ur welcome :finger: hahahah Love ya !!
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:iconbewildered-scribbler:
Mood: Neutral *Bewildered-Scribbler Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hahahhaha:finger::tighthug:
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:iconlifes-what-u-make-it:
hahahhahahahahahah:finger: :finger: :finger:
ahahahahhahhahhahh:tighthug: :tighthug:
ahahahahahahahahaa:tighthug: :tighthug:
ahahahhaahhahahaha :finger: :finger: :finger:

Yeah Sista ! I won xD
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:iconbewildered-scribbler:
Mood: Joy *Bewildered-Scribbler Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:finger::finger::finger::finger::finger::finger::finger::finger::finger::finger::finger::finger::finger::finger::finger::finger::finger::finger::finger::finger::finger::finger::finger::finger::finger:
Not quite hahahah:tighthug:
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:iconlifes-what-u-make-it:
ughh hahahahah pshh what ever xD Whos ur best friend HUH HUH HUH hahahah xD Whats her name LMAOOO :finger:
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